Silvia raises an eyebrow

SILVIA: Effects? What do you mean?

Eesa takes a deep breath, then smiles slightly as they explain.

EESA: I'm... empathic.

Silvia leans in, curious.

SILVIA: You can feel other people's emotions?
EESA: And... their pain. It's... useful for treating injury...

Eesa lowers their head.

EESA: but it makes talking... harder. I feel... what people feel about me... How they feel about what I'm saying... It makes it harder to... form the words.

Silvia smiles sympathetically.

2-23 Empathic

This scene alone I think I re-wrote about 4 times.  It's really interesting to go back and see how a conversation or a bit of dialog changes over edit passes, and how it gets (hopefully) better.

Anyway, a small reveal about Eesa!  Turns out that being empathic does not mix well with social anxiety.  I like to think of it as an emotional speech jammer.

Thanks for reading, see you next week!

- IKE

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