Ever since taking over the lettering I've had to learn quickly how to condense and shorten a lot of my script lines, mostly because I don't want to cover up too much of the art that Sarsi does. In the end I think it's for the best, as when I'm just writing the script I tend to get overly verbose, which is not the most conducive to the medium that is comics.
See you next week!
- Ike
--TRANSCRIPT--
Silvia and Eesa walk, continuing their discussion.
SILVIA: So, is the Bunkhouse like an orphange?
EESA: Not... exactly. Most of the kids... come and go.
A flashback shows some young people in an alley
EESA: Lots of Undercity kids have... nowhere to go...
A warm dinner table in the Bunkhouse, Mamuka brings a bowl of soup
EESA: Mamuka and Dorian make sure they... have a safe place
They walk down the street, Eesa seeming more engaged and confident than earlier.
EESA: Lorielle and I both stayed there a lot. She is the one who convinced Dorian to let us join him as Hunters.
